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A Song of Remembrance (3)

Updated: Jul 29

A Song of Remembrance (part 3 of 3)


The dazzling being stood beside the General, who was still upon his knees, and lifted a silver shield to block an incoming barrage of arrows; the projectiles bouncing harmlessly off his shield. The fiery tips went out the moment they came in contact with the silver plating of the being’s armor. Each fell to the ground with barely a sizzle.

 

Then another being appeared, and another, until the field was flooded with an army of divine beings. Some wore robes, some shone so bright they appeared as little more than orbs of light. Some flew about, darting around faster than my eyes could track them. Others strode forward to engage the enemy.

 

The bovine creature roared in fury, in dismay. The shadowy creatures on the field with him screeched and squealed, mixtures of hatred, terror, and anguish in their noises.

 

All the while, the humans seemed oblivious. They continued the fight, confused as the front lines began to press forward once more. The divine beings made ground and they had relief from the fiery barrage of arrows. The tides had turned and they fought with all they had, not wanting to give up ground they had not won alone.

 

The divine being who had appeared beside the General looked down with a nod before charging forward, sword drawn.

 

The General rose to his feet, eyes… watching the being as it strode into the fray.

 

He saw it?

 

 It was as if his eyes had been opened, but only to that one divine being, he didn’t notice any of the others. Hand tightly gripping his sword, he let out a battle cry, charging toward conflict after the divine being with renewed vigor, tear-streaks still apparent on his face.

 

The battle raged for over an hour; the divine beings fighting back for the ground the shadowy wisps had won. But many times the battle would stall, and I wondered how many lives would be lost as the humans continued to holler, and scream, and thrust swords into each other.

 

Then the divine being, who had appeared beside the General, lifted his eyes toward a fellow being decked in white robes, perfectly-crafted bow in hand and a quiver of never-ending golden arrows upon his back. The glowing archer nodded and notched an arrow, lifting it with a steady hand.

 

The battle seemed to pause a moment, and my eyes narrowed in on that arrow. I knew that one projectile heralded a pivotal moment for the battle, and time seemed to freeze as it soared across the field.

 

The bovine creature noticed it, too, but too late. He roared and stumbled backward a mere moment before the arrow met its mark. It lodged firmly in the middle of the eye, piercing all the way through, halfway up the shaft of the arrow. The creature howled with a stagger, reaching up to break the arrow in half. He dropped the feathered end as if it had stung him, baying in pain.

 

The shadowy forces surrounding him became frantic and began to fall back. They took residence in the trees on the fringes of the battlefield.

 

The commanding divine being lifted his shield in front of him, and hollered in a voice that carried like a trumpet, “Creatures and beings of darkness! You have no purchase here! You have no power! LEAVE! NOW!”

 

There was wailing and shrieking as they fled and dissipated, fleeing from the fury of the divine being.

 

The enemy army soon realized the tides had shifted and followed suit, heading into the forest to run with what little forces they had left. Then the divine beings began to leave as well, slowly, with melodies fading on the air.

 

I lifted my voice, fragile as it may be, toward the heavens. I trilled out a song across that blood-soaked battlefield of sorrow and decay.

 

The soldiers’ cries of victory turned to wails as they picked across the carnage. The wreckage they had left behind.

 

I watched with a broken heart as my song continued.


soldier coffin

The bright being that had commanded the troops stood in the middle of the field, long after his fellows had departed. After some time, his eyes found me as I sung my melody of mourning.

 

So much death. So much pain.


I warbled out a remembrance, in the voice the Creator had given me. And I wondered how many lives could have been saved if only the General had stopped before the battle had begun. And knelt upon his knees. And cried out to his Maker.


"For we wrestle not against flesh and blood, but against principalities, against powers, against the rulers of the darkness of this world, against spiritual wickedness in high places."

(Ephesians 6:12, KJV)


~ G. G. Marshall



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